Pain
This pain I feel,
Will it ever end. A
Constant struggle, War in
my mind constant struggle.
Sleep is my only time
away from the Thoughts
that hound my head.
I need some Thing. to give
me a peace. I turn to
Jesus and I have instant
relief. I do what he asks
and the peace fills my life
I know he is finally pleased
with me. My conscience is free
I have my Joy, my smile,
my old self. I fall into
a peaceful sleep Knowing
My conscience is finally appeased.
- Andrew Smith
Wanting
Not having,
but desiring
a choice I
cannot make.
A difference
not given to me
though I want
It so badly, without which
I would die.
- Tommy Butcher
I Wonder
Sometimes times I
sit and wonder
If my dreams will come true
What will it be like
When they do
how will I react
Sometimes I wonder
Sometimes I wonder
How things in my life will
change or will they
Stay the same I
wonder if new people
will come into my life
will they love me for
just being me
will they try to
Change
me can I be me around
any and everyone
will love someday consume
me or will I be overcome
by hate will I be too
Late I wonder
Wonder.
- Mark Jones
Believe
Make me
Try to believe
Only because i fail
It is your fault with a passion
Dare you?
- Eric Martin
Tears
All these tears. Will
they ever stop? The
constant pain and hurting.
Are they worth all the
tears. To live these
days. In pain and agony,
The tears never stop.
Until my time is up.
Standing in the rain to
blend in with my Tears...
These tears will leave me
alone...When all my hurting
is gone...
These tears will finally be away
from me...
- Valencia Harper
Happiness
A lot of things in life
Bring me happiness
But through everything
God is the best.
We have our toys
And our games
Everything we want
Even personal fame.
But one day we all will
either live in eternal death or Happiness.
The one I have is God
I don't want that eternal death.
It's my Heaven
Will it be yours?
- Scott Witt
Insomniac
Not sleeping
but doing what exactly?
These things running
through my head are...
No, they can't even be called thoughts
Not cohesive enough.
In a strange state;
A state of Nothingness
But I'm still aware...
Not of where I am
Nor of what's happening...
But of the Nothingness?
I lay here: strangest images
and words passing through
My subconsciousness.
What is that I think I see?
'Tis Nothing but a ghost
conjured up by my sleep deprived Mind...
Or is it?
Passing over the hill Now,
after I have crested it
I shall be at the home of deepest sleep
But until I reach that peak,
I must continue this journey
the journey of the Insomniac.
- Jeremy Davison
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Thursday, March 11, 2010
Wednesday, February 3, 2010
Cinquains (1/28/2010)
A cinquain is a five-line poem with the following syllabication:
Line 1: two syllables
Line 2: four syllables
Line 3: six syllables
Line 4: eight syllables
Line 5: two syllables
To help you further understand, here's Andrew's self-aware cinquain.
Five lines,
Having two, four,
Six, eight, two syllables -
One for each of the lines making
Cinquain.
Get it? It's a cinquain about a cinquain.
The Breakup, P. Reagan
I woke
After she left -
Broken, reeling, hurting.
She left so abruptly, I wept.
I died.
Done, T. Butcher
I've come
To make an end
Of rhyming that is wrong.
Now poets who don't rhyme correctly
Are done.
Tommy seems obsessed with ending his poems.
Song of Nature, J. Davison
Ah yes,
Sweet Euphonies!
The songs of the Bluebirds.
What sweet joy and Bliss fills my ears.
Nature.
When I read this in class, I said "Nature," like Will Ferrell as Bob Goulet in that SNL sketch.
Mourning Song, J. Davison
Oy vey!
My alarm clock!
Cruel enemy of sleep -
I should throw it out the window...
'Tis done.
(Untitled), S. Witt
Before
I go on to
Die, I want to live now
For God; to love Him everyday,
He's mine.
Butterflies, V. Harper-Chambers
They fly
In my tummy
They are there all day and
Night; All fluttering around butt-
-erflies.
Tuesday, February 2, 2010
Sonnets, Part One (1/25/2010)
I hope these live up to their advertising. There are two types of sonnets: English and Italian. The English consists of three quatrains (ababcdcdefef) and a couplet (gg), representing arguments or statements on the topic and then a couplet conclusion. The Italian consists of an octave (abbaabba) and a sestet (which can maintain multiple rhyme schemes). The division of thought is a bit more vague. Part Two is coming soon. (Spoiler: one sonnet is an ode to the Jonas brothers!)
Form: English (Shakespearean)
Poet: A. Smith
Oh, Marshall, how you should have felt my day
Go down when I heard that I must try to
Attempt to write a sonnet that I may
Give you a chance to give my grade that's due.
You should have seen the rage that came o'er me:
"He doesn't understand the time it takes,"
I said. I could not write of love for Thee,
My mind was full of hate that could not break.
I knew I had to face reality.
I get to work to make my sonnet nice.
I chose the English - what monstrosity,
With fourteen lines my head turns into rice.
I feel relief for I'm near done. May you
Be pleased with my effort because I'm through.
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Form: English (Shakespearean)
Poet: T. Butcher
The sword doth ring and shine as 'tis drawn out
Of its scabbard. This blade shall soon taste blood.
"Foolish it was to mock this man!" it shouts.
The one that threw the gauntlet down doth brood.
For 'tis his own fault that brought him such pain.
Now since he bought the fight with his own words,
He shan't bring this upon himself ever again.
His body crumpled as though by many hordes,
The sword, now sheathed kills no more men again,
For out of the darkness the dead man walks
Coming back from the dead, condemning sin.
The man that killed him doth turn 'round and balk.
I awake to find nothing has changed but
A cold sweat has broken, my arm is cut.
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Form: Italian (Petrarchan)
Poet: E. Martin
(Sobriety: questionable)
Once upon the little tree
I saw the leaves begin to give
But before then I saw them live
Then It right looked right at me
The trees then blew long and short
But never again to sway again
And felt the wind end to end
Also giving a good report
There they are gone to win
They play with socks and yarn.
Here they come with the hats on high.
If the team comes again,
He'll be so happy to see the barn.
So come again to see the trees fly.
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Form: Italian (Petrarchan)
Poet: P. Reagan
What a Feeling When Love Knocks You Down
What a thing it is when you lose your love
She walks and scorns and curses your good name
You feel as if you are in wretch and shame
Her love, her warmth, her joy flies like a dove
You want to see, to love, to hug, to kiss
Today, you thought you saw her light from far
And thought, I will never live up to par
You got all excited for only this
Every breath, every step today you take
You resolve to commit for new loves' sake
So you can breathe, can wake, can walk all days
And so you can make more than one hoss shays
Yes, when love throws, love knocks, love flings you down
You won't live alone with an endless frown.
Labels:
Petrarch,
rhyme scheme,
Shakespeare,
skills,
sonnets,
sophomores,
thought division
Monday, February 1, 2010
Limericks (1/28/2010)
Believe me: some really impressive sonnets will be posted soon. But for now, try to appreciate this limericks. To their credit, they were reeling a bit from the sonnet assignment: their poetic abilities were a bit taxed.
Here comes a kid named Cob,
Thence once was a man named Bob,
That never knew how to give
He finally felt big
Just because he decided to rob.
- Eric Martin (who must have composed this in a matter of seconds)
There was an old woman named Ben
Who cried when she saw a red wren.
When was asked her own name
She answered in shame
That wren did not rhyme with Ben.
- Tommy Butcher
She woke up before school one spring day
It was late so she could not say "hey"
To her mom who was fun
She liked to see sun
So she said, "I am just making fun!"
- Patrick Reagan
There was a young man from Kentucky
Who persistently hoped to get lucky
And find a cool car
Whose rubber he'd char
But he got ate by his young dog, Bucky.
- Jeremy Davison
There once was a man from the West
Who never was the very best
Then he went to the school
And he learned a new rule
That he could become the smart-est.
- Andrew Smith
I am the man with the plan
Who also has a tan
I live every day and night
Without any fright
That's why I'm the man with the plan.
- Scott Witt
Violence is everything to us.
I'd laugh if you got hit by a bus.
Your brains on the ground-
Your legs we have found.
I'd get weak if you got hit by a bus.
- Christina Jones
There was a man, Saddam Hussein
Was sometime thought to be mundane
Kids teased of his nose,
He shot off their toes.
He grew up and ended to hang.
- Tim Keep
Haikus (1/28/2010)
The following haikus are from my English 10 class. Comment and let me know what your favorite is. (This is very important to the sophomores.)
There's no one to hate.
My heart, much bigger than that
I choose to love all.
- Tim Keep
I live to be me -
The best of my potential
Always to be me.
- Scott Witt
Rolling like the sea -
Or it is flat as a plane.
All is a grassy land.
- Andrew Smith
Pablo Picasso
Considered by many great
But not so by me.
- Jeremy Davison
Ending
An end is in sight
To my Japanese haiku
It is here right now.
- Tommy Butcher
I love chocolate.
I also like caramel
But white is the best.
- Eric Martin
The falling marker
Hitting the ground with a thud
Was Mister CC.
- Valencia Harper
Spring Dream
Flower's bloom, birds fly,
Scents permeate, breezes rush.
I now feel alive.
- Patrick Reagan
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